Age/Gender: 18, Male
Location: The Netherlands
Job: Student
Not very interesting a.t.m. Usuallly I am working on my OGame account. Or playing some games of Magic:The Gathering.
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Very nice indeed, I know how difficult it is to make a decent stop-motion animation, and your effort does pay off.
The only point of improvement that I see is the dialogue, it isn't bad, but it isn't good either.
The next video you make I would suggest a little more dialogue, that keeps people interested.
Very good job furthermore!
Author's Response:
I know, the dialogue was pretty lame. I need to get better at writing.
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The animation itself wasn't too bad, but the horrible sound quality is a major point of improvement: you've got plenty of MB's left so why the sound isn't very good remains a mystery for me.
Furthermore: the animation was good, it didn't shake and the people were drawn quite well actually.
So all in all i rate you 6/10 and 3/5.
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This indeed has potential, only a few suggestions from my side to improve it:
-Add color: though black and white has it's charm, my eyes become very tired of looking to it.
-Make the size larger, the comic looked good, but it is almost impossible to read, my mark is based on the looks and not on the story as my webbrowser(s) were unable to give a satisfying look on the letters.
Further than that just keep it up!
Author's Response:
Sorry about the so-so quality, darn filesize limits...
Did holding down the buttons not help?
And I'll definately try to add color in part 2!
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